Lucid Animation

my final project at the uni may 2007, duration 2 weeks( only 4 hours sleep). program used: photoshop cs2, illustrator cs2, aftereffects 7, particle illusion 3.0, Final cut pro. i forgot what the brief says, but its like make it the best you've ever done and it will be show on an exhibition graduate showcase, venue Light House Brighton, POSH Venue*, i did all in my powers to make this as good as possible but time was my enemy, i still have to improve this alot but oh well at least i got a B+ grade on this which is fine for me^^ in the end i still have to finalized this for my own improvement, hope anybody liked it at least. a simple constructive comment will be appreciated thank you!